4. Write down an argumentative essay about one of the given topics below. Organize your essay in three paragraphs including an introduction, a body paragraph (reasons, results, and solutions) and a conclusion. Your essay will be evaluated according to the given criteria. • Workers in various industries often suffer from unsafe conditions, challenging their right to a safe workplace. • People in remote areas still travel long distances to access healthcare services. • Many children are forced to work instead of attending school, which deprives them of their right to education. Criteria Achievement Levels Points Very Good Good Needs to be Improved Writing has a coherent structure to address an introduction, body paragraph, and conclusion. There is a logical flow throughout the essay. Writing lacks a structure to address an introduction, body paragraph, and conclusion.The flow throughout the essay is missing. Writing has a structure to address an introduction, body paragraph, and conclusion. Organization (×2) The content effectively addresses the topic with insightful analysis and detail. Main points are well-developed and supported with strong evidence and examples. The content addresses the topic with only main points. Ideas are developed and supported with adequate evidence or examples. The content addresses the topic, but may lack depth or detail. Main points are unclear or not well-developed. Content (×2) Vocabulary is very limited and makes it difficult to express given topic. Vocabulary Vocabulary is related to the given topic. Vocabulary is partly related to given topic. Frequent grammatical errors hinder understanding. Grammar Sentences are grammatically correct. Sentences have minor grammatical errors. Total
✅ Cevap ve adım adım çözüm
1. Bir konu seç ve üç paragraf planla: giriş (sorun ve görüşün), gelişme (nedenler, sonuçlar, çözümler), sonuç.
2. "Firstly, because of, as a result, to solve this problem, in conclusion" gibi bağlaçlar kullan.
Cevap: Örnek kompozisyon (child labour):
Many children are forced to work instead of going to school. I strongly believe this is a serious violation of their right to education.
The main reason is poverty, because many families need extra money. As a result, these children miss school, lose their childhood, and have fewer job opportunities in the future. To solve this problem, governments should support poor families financially and make education free and compulsory. Moreover, strict laws should punish employers who hire children.
In conclusion, every child deserves to be at school, not at work. If we work together, we can protect their right to education.
Benzer ifadeler de doğru kabul edilir.
Dikkat: Gelişme paragrafında neden, sonuç ve çözümün üçünü de mutlaka yaz; biri eksik olursa içerik puanı düşer.